Minecraft Help

Hey blog readers its cardiffsbookreviews here with well wait for it, here it is i need some help making a minecraft server for me and my friends but i cant get it to work so i was hoping that one of you out there can help me with this so please comment down below and we will talk so the best place to see me is on the Aether 2 server right now or we will talk by email so this help request is going once going twice going three times sold to the person that can help me with my server mix up so if anyone will get on the aether server my username is drum roll please its, Cardiffht001 that’s right so come on. And if your help works i’ll send you the ip address and you can play with us. In the mean time keep on reading!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Shout Out

Hey blog readers it’s Cardiffsbookreviews with a shout out to my sisters blog leucadiasworld so please look at it it would mean a lot to her so I’m sorry that this was short but it’s just a shout out so in the mean time Keep on reading!!!!!!!!!!!

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Opening My Blog Up To More

Hey blog readers its cardiffsbookreviews here with a super cool update. I’m gonna open my blog up to more than just book review’s. So I can blog a lot more about more things. But I don’t want to do this to fast I want your thoughts. Do you think I should open it up to more or keep it on just book reviews. So please put your thoughts in the comments below. After you’ve all commented I will tally up the score. And I  will announce the winner. So again comments below please put your thoughts so bye and as always.

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Sorry Its Been So Long

Hey blog readers its cardiffsbookreveiws and i’m here to say how sorry i am for not posting for so long its just been a fun summer for me and i’m sorry i did not post any thing over it i should have and that’s another reason why i’m having the naming contest so again i am very sorry for keeping you hanging around like that for me to post something new and i know that its the end of summer but i have been sick these last few days so please forgive me and all of you out there who have liked and followed my blog i’m sorry to you as well and i know that iv’e said id be posting a lot more of the time and i did not and i’m sorry for that as well i hope that me saying sorry will help and thank you all for reading what i have posted here and not just on my blog but reading this and staying in this post to this end. any way in the mean time keep on reading!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!reading!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! okay bye keep on reading!

Subjective Narrative Voice Attitude

Cardiff Hoffman –Terry

10-22-12

 

#1 Narrative Voice Attitude

 

  1. Narrative voice attitude: subjective
  2. Reader should feel: like they were there with me

That morning we got up I knew the day came to go to Knott’s Berry Farm. The car ride was long and tiring. When we finally got there I was excited and full of energy, like I could fly. The lines were so long to get in they reached the parking lot. We had to join the ranks and get in line to make our way in.

The buildup and anticipation was almost too much for me to handle; I felt like I was a lit box of TNT. Just before I couldn’t take it anymore we were in! I saw huge crowds of people going here and there. I smelled fresh warm buttery popcorn being popped.

We went on every ride we could go on except Leucadia who was too small. We went to camp snoopy where there were plenty of rides for her.

At the end of the day daddy wanted him and I to go on the “big rollercoasterGhost Rider. I wanted to go on it but I didn’t have enough courage built up to ride it. Until he finally, was able to talk me into going; so away we went to the line. We waited, and waited and waited some more. For over two hours. It was night, it was dark, and was very cold. During our time in line I listened and heard the sound of people walking, talking and waiting with excitement as we listened to the others screaming as the roller coaster sped down the rail and seemed to drop into the dark night. Then the rain clouds covered the sky. We made it into the rollercoaster car just in time it to start raining. After being secured in our seats we slowly crept off up the endless hill. The track was so dimly lit it was tormenting as we made our first of many terrifying drops. All I could think was; is this ever going to end. When the ride stopped I was so thrilled to get off because I was so affright and shaking faster than a Chihuahua.

 

Subjective Voice Narrative

The poor old man had grown very weak and pathetic. He lived alone in the mountains at least 50 miles from the nearest town.

The snow fall had been dangerous and unusually high that year, trapping him in his house for a month. He had been without food for a week now. He found himself very scared and hungry. He was in a desperate situation.

The only way out of his house was through a small window. His one chance to stay alive was to trap the rabbit he spotted the other day. He put out the trap and waited. It was near. The small rabbit was having a hard time digging down deep enough to get to any of the dried grasses and the small limbs of the bushes it had to eat. The trap snapped shut.

 

By Cardiff Hoffman-Terry